* begins by checking her appearance in a mirror whilst legging on to dating website
* see her typing on the computer. camera becomes her eyes and we see what she is looking at a word document full of work - switched to retail site - switched to dating website
* overlappping screen where we see her replying to match request and the actual dat is playing on top
* last date doesn't show up (screen returns to proper focus) and we can shes given up trying to find Mr right
* then we are introduced to Joe, who is the waiter and comes and gives her a drink on the house
* we see them hitting it off and the camera zooms out and we leave the story
this is a good story, Amy. there is good indication of genre for the audience, and also enough scope for comery.
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